雅思作文范文(怎样高效利用雅思写作范文)

雅思写作高分范文是各位烤鸭们在备考写作过程中重要的参考资料，在C4-C13这10本书中，有关Task 2的范文仅14篇，数量之少令人惋惜，因此烤鸭们更应该充分利用。接下来就一起以C8T3T2为例来学习研习高分范文的步骤吧。

题干如下：

Increasing the price of petrol is the best way to solve growing traffic and pollution problems. To what extent do you agree or disagree? What other measures do you think might be effective?

第一步：仔细审题，列出自己的写作提纲。如：

Para 1: 背景知识+题目改写+表达观点

Para 2: 同意/不同意的原因（以不同意为例）

①提高油价的办法只对少部分的穷人有效，因为富人不在乎多出的油价，他们仍旧会继续使用私家车。

Para 3: 其它有效的方法

①鼓励人们使用公共交通

②建造更多更宽的路

Para 4:总结

第二步：通读范文，总结文章的提纲，与自己的版本进行核对。如：

Para 1：引出话题+表达观点

Para 2：不同意的原因

①油价提升不能长远地抑制私家车的数量。

②油价的提高也会影响私家车的数量，因此这个方法会很不受欢迎。

Para 3：解决污染的有效方法：开发新能源+说服制造商和出行者生产和使用清洁能源驱动的车

Para 4：解决交通堵塞的有效方法：改善可供出行者使用的公共交通服务（建立和维护足够的轻轨和地铁系统+使长途列车和汽车更具吸引力）

Para 5：总结

对比后，可积累范文提纲中不同意的原因②，且会发现自己的提纲中未包含解决污染问题的方法，可进行改进。

第三步：精读范文，积累好词（同意替换+其他表达）并背诵，如：

increasing the price of petrol=a rise in the price of petrol=higher fuel costs

be likely to do sth. 很有可能做某事

affect v. 影响

public transport 公共交通

implement v. 实施

have a huge effect on 对……有巨大的影响

tackle v. 解决

……

第四步：精读范文，积累好句+背诵

There is no doubt that+句子 毫无疑问的是

It is undeniable that+句子 不可否认的是

As this policy would also affect the cost of public transport, it would be very unpopular with everyone who needs to travel on the roads. (as引导原因状语从句)

……

第五步：复述全文（可偶尔借助中文翻译）

C8T3T2 Model Answer

There is no doubt that traffic and pollution from vehicles have become huge problems, both in cities and on motorways everywhere. Solving these problems is likely to need more than a simple rise in the price of petrol.

While it is undeniable that private car use is one of the main causes of the increase in traffic and pollution, higher fuel costs are unlikely to limit the number of drivers for long. As this policy would also affect the cost of public transport, it would be very unpopular with everyone who needs to travel on the roads. But there are various other measures that would be implemented that would have a huge effect on these problems.

I think to tackle the problem of pollution; cleaner fuels need to be developed. The technology is already available to produce electric cars that would be both quieter and cleaner to use. Persuading manufacturers and travelers to adopt this new technology would be a more effective strategy for improving air quality, especially in cities.

However, traffic congestion will not be solved by changing the type of private vehicle people can use. To do this, we need to improve the choice of public transport services available to travelers. For example, if sufficient sky trains and underground train systems were built and effectively maintained in our major cities, then traffic on the roads would be dramatically reduced. Long-distance train and coach services should be made attractive and affordable alternatives to driving your own car for long journeys.

In conclusion, I think that long-term traffic and pollution reductions would depend on educating the public to use public transport more, and on governments using public money to construct and run efficient systems.

范文翻译：

毫无疑问，在城市和各地的高速公路上，机动车造成的交通和污染问题已经变得相当严重。要解决这些问题需要的很可能不只是提高油价。

无可否认，私家车的使用是交通和污染问题增加的主要原因之一，但提升燃油价格不太可能长期限制驾车人的数量。由于这一政策也会影响到公共交通的花费，因此它将非常不受所有需要在公路上行驶的人欢迎。但是还有各种其他的措施，一旦实施，即会对这些问题产生巨大影响。

我认为要解决污染问题需要开发更清洁的燃料。我们已经拥有可以用来制造更安静、更清洁的电动汽车的技术。说服厂商和出行者采用这一新技术会是改进空气质量,尤其是城市中的空气质量的更有效的策略。

然而，交通拥堵的问题不会通过改变人们能使用的私家车的种类来解决。为了解决这个问题，我们需要改进出行者所能得到的公共交通服务的选择。比如，如果在主要城市中能够建造并有效维护充足的高架列车和地铁系统，那么公路.上的交通将会急剧减少。长途列车和长途公共汽车应该成为自驾长途旅行的价廉物美的替代性选择。

总之，我认为长期缓解交通和污染问题有赖于教育公众更多地使用公共交通工具,有赖于政府使用公共资金建造和运营有效的公交系统。